Alot of progress you've shown us so far! The composition for the title screen also looks really nice! I just wanna know why Calum is looking seemingly into the distance because it's kinda confusing? Other than that it's good :3
Looking at the concept art, I had an idea if you wanted to try zooming out the camera a little bit and add a foreground element? (Like a tree or more bushes) So it could look more interesting!
Elio has shiny boobas :3
Waaaa, thank you for your inputs!
Maybe it doesn't make as much sense as it did it my head, but I was trying to go for showing that Calum doesn't wanna focus on any one person... by literally not looking at anyone in the picture!
If the metaphor thingy didn't work very well, maybe I should reconsider it...
Also foreground sounds cool! I'll put that on my to-do list :D
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Ur welcome!! I just woke up, but maybe instead of just looking into the distance, he's closing his eyes and resting? The other two would look like they're admiring his eepy peaceful expression, and that way you could still have the same metaphor you're aiming for but still retain the same composition!
