@jakeoff what software did you use to create the image. the game you made looked good, and I do agree with the comments. this image looks good, but I prefer to use my own. the reason why I ask is there were a few oddities such as extra words, incorrect color of the diamond dust. and wrong color of the berries. (the last one is forgivable since the image is small and it is hard to tell what they looked like), if you want here is the reference story for the berries, I used (foxberries). this takes place well over 10 years before the events of this game. these are the exact same type in that story you can also read the other stories on that same github but most are encrypted). 
here is a preview for level 2 the face rooms are ones I have not yet started.