Hey JaClay, thank you for sharing your music!
I'll start with Follow Me; I absolutely LOVE the Piano Sound you used and the harmonies + arpeggios were both very pretty and moody (which is great)! This piece made me think of someone quietly reflecting on something as they sit alone late at night under the cover of the moonlight, and I think the imagery and storytelling that your piece put into my brain aligns well with what you were hoping to achieve! I just wonder if the Strings and Synths could've been a little more active at certain points... I love that you were going for a more ambient feeling (which often implies some stillness), but I'd like to see if the Strings and Synths could add a bit more life to the piece. Beyond that, I love this piece because it gave me a STRONG FEELING and some Vivid Imagery, which means that you did a great job in my opinion!
Now let's talk Finding the Way Home: I really like this one! I love that you steadily introduce new sounds and ultimately build a really cool soundscape, you start with this bell like instrument (not sure what this one is), and then introduce the Piano, some Strings, a REALLY NICE Synth and so on so forth. I also really love the kind of chromatic wilt you use from about 0:32 to 0:40 to transition into the next section, that felt really good! I honestly can't think of a great criticism for this one (you did a great job), all of I have is a matter of personal taste; I wish the track was a bit more atmospheric, meaning I wish the instruments were less dry and had a bit more reverb, I also wish that instruments blended together more and that there was a maybe a Pad in there in order to make the sound fuller and rounder. This is just a matter of personal taste, I honestly love this piece and it has great character, really nice work JaClay!
I had a lot of fun checking out your work, I hope more people see your music and I wish you the best for this Jam JaClay!