Honestly one of the best H-games i have played.
First of all, I just want to tell your whole team how good every part of the game is. The game design is great, and the game is very well put together. The design is clear enough that, for example, the map is very logical and won't confuse players. Additionally, the writing is very good. I should probably focus on the other parts of the writing, but the starting part when we got to the h-scene was hilarious.
The programming in this game is really fluid, and everything functions super well. For a beta, I usually expect quite a few issues with the actual coding, where even if stuff is functioning correctly, it may not function super fluidly. Yet, it is clear to see your passion for this project and your skill in putting everything together while making it work so well so early in development.
As a pixel artist myself, I know how much time and effort pixel art actually takes. Considering how many pixel art assets there are in the game, they are all great. It just shows your skill with pixel art and how much time you have put into the project.
The general art in this game, is super professionally done, and it’s an art style that I really enjoy. There is nothing I can say to give you input since it's already so perfect! I look forward to seeing more art from you!
And of course, you, Poruparu. Firstly, I'll just mention this: the character designs are amazing and more than perfect in my eyes. Yet what I want to focus on is the amazing team you have put together and how it's very clear that, without your effort producing this project, it wouldn't have come together so well. I can't wait to see more from you and your team with this project and your future ones too!
Now, the improvements that I could think of while playing the game. These are purely parts of the game I thought you could improve in future updates. I am well aware that the game is unfinished, and some things mentioned may already be planned and will likely be changed in the future:
during the h-mini games, I would say, make the lust-bar semi transparent so it's easier to see where you actually are within the lines (image 1)
I assume this is already planned but instead of this blue base character change it to the person you play as. (image 2)
May be nice to be able to click on certain boxes or whatever during general
exploration time and be able to find (for example) a dildo, and it ends up leading or gives a task that will result in another h scene. Maybe in the example below, you would have to find a chair or ladder or something before you can open the box and find it. (image 3)
also small edit: As much as I can play on the computer, I feel like this game could be ported to mobile, which would increase traffic to the game because it deserves so much more exposure.
