You've done well for this first experience! Nice use of the main melody throughout the track though I may have liked to have some variations/development on it that would lead us in an unattented place!
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Hmmm ok, yeah that makes sense. I think, specifically in the vocal section at the end, I wanted a straight call-back to the piano melody. But in hindsight, I agree, I think it would have been a good opportunity to expand on it. And maybe make it more prominent in the work as a whole? Thank you! I'll definitely remember this for my next composition :)