I like your character's personalities! Quite a long story for a jam entry, but you delivered a great game.
I can see you are mastering the JRPG genera.
The way the music matched the story beats was wonderful!
The UI looks great and intuitive, I especially like the way information is displayed on the character portraits.
I think I would like to see some animation of the player characters doing attacks instead of just the portraits, but you gotta pick the battles in a jam.