Really really good! It's a crime you only have 6 ratings.
Do yourself a favor and definitely go rate others for visibility, you should be more popular within the jam.
One thing I wish you had done though, but it's a minor nitpick, would be to try and get volume up on 1 & 2 a bit so there's not so much discrepancy with the 3 beautifully mixed & mastered track.
Great submission!