This is one of the most interesting compositions I've heard in all of the pieces I've reviewed for the jam. It is because of the chord choices and the dissonant melody. I felt however (as wildionio also mentions) more dynamic expressions in your strings would have really lifted this piece up. The composition and all the fun stuff is there except the expression part, which makes it less fluid and more rigidy. But this is just constructive criticism, overall I really liked your entry! Keep up the good work !
I would really appreciate if you could also rate my entry too !
Thanks !