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Im just gonna go through this one one song at a time!

BLUE: The rubato in the piano was an excellent choice, it really helped the song have a more natural feel! Super rich instrumentation and incredible ups and downs that made this feel really complete and professional. The story along with this was so nice!

DIVE: The feeling of exploration was really strong here! I think 6/8 does an excellent job of fitting vibes like this, and you handled the rhythms well contrasting the drums and that repeated string rhythmic pattern. I think the trumpets were a little bit on the loud some times and felt a bit piercing compared to everything else but still excellent

WAVE: Really fun and playful little shop theme, with enough variation I think it would work well as a loop in game!

FLOW: I love how purposeful your instrumentation choices are, i especially liked the guitar in this one! Super relaxing, and I love the reverb and how you used it on the backing instruments! I love the contrast between the soft and louder parts, but i feel like the soft parts were a tad on the quiet side, really lovely though!

SINK: This song has a really strong feeling of determination to it, the woman's determination to get through these fears and anxieties and using these positive ideas to help her! The bends on the strings really helped to add another personal touch to this which was really cool.

DEEP: An excellent tonal shift from the rest of the soundtrack! I think this was really well done, i do wish the percussion was a bit more present throughout the track (but i do like the removal of it around 1:40, the space there felt super intentional and resonated with me a lot!)

BREATHE: Finally a story where the mother doesnt die/j 

This last one felt like such a lovely conclusion to the story you made for this, and the great thing is that this soundtrack still stands out very well as its own work separate from the story! This song made me feel incredibly at peace, which is an excellent way to end off this journey!

Really well done overall!

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I am thoroughly humbled by the amount of time and attentive listening you put into this comment. Your feedback is highly valued and I didn’t even notice some of the detailed things until you mentioned them (the trumpet in DIVE for example, I agree should have been a little further back, and the percussion in DEEP probably should have been mixed a little more clearly with less reverb). Thank you so much for taking the time to share your experience of my work and for the quality of your feedback. I appreciate it immensely!