i had some trouble getting it started, but I was glad I did! it's definitely one of the more original concepts, and I can see big potential for it. this next line is a bit of a spoiler, so I'll encrypt it in ROT13:
jura V ernyvmrq gung v jnf cynlvat ntnvafg n ercynl bs gur bgure irefvba bs zr, V unq bar bs gubfr 'jbj' zbzragf gung bayl unccra va terng tnzrf.
very mind-bendy. nice work!