This was so nice!!!! I fell in love with how purposeful every single choice was according to the little blurbs you wrote, and paired with some lovely writing you really sold the story and emotions you were trying to generate to me very well. My one piece of feedback is to experiment a bit with less you instrumentation but the sound of it, adding a bit of reverb will really help to fill out the sound you have here. Also when you are writing those gorgeous moving piano lines, try making those shorter nots longer or messing around with your vst to create a sustain effect, as that would be more similar to how it is played in real life and will give even more life to your brilliant writing. Great work!