Day 5 of Rating Submissions With Few Ratings to Hopefully Get Some in Return
I will,preface this by saying that rating Musescore Midi is a bit hard for me, as I would never feel comfortable putting that sound into a video game. Having said that, I will do my best to rate your composition as just that.
I think your harmonic part wriiting is solid and I appreciate the attempts to build tension with a contrast between stagnant sectiond and more vivid and angular ones. Having said that, I would try to maybe revisit material more often, so it feels like ideas are more developed upon. You often see this kind of writing in trailer music where the emotional beats can shift on a dime, but without accompanying video, it is tough to understand why emotional shifts are happening. I think tightening up the structural and thematic elements could really bring this composition to the next level - that and orchestrating it with a better VST, of course.