I enjoyed playing that, I like the way the story progresses and it's got a good pace to it. Great job!
The presentation was great and the game had a good feel to it. However, there was a disjoint in styles between the hands & weapons compared to the rest of the world.
I did find it a little too challenging when it came to combating the enemies - there wasn't much in the way of feedback when hitting them, so I wasn't sure when attacked landed. Also I felt you died too easily, looks like two hits and you're dead - seemed a bit harsh. Would have been cool to have easier enemies to start with, then build up the difficulty as you progress.
Still, great submission - worked really well and led the player down the path perfectly. The climbing parts were well done too, other games they can be annoying, but they worked great on this. Nicely done!