This game was really nice. The presentation is ambitious and wonderful, and its come together really nicely in the timeframe of the jam. The 3D designs on top of painterly 2D backgrounds with a limited color palette is an art direction that works really well, with super lovely music to tie it all together. I also think that the themes of the game are woven very neatly into the context of the fictional world, and I really enjoyed the little story of each animal character that tie into how different animals react to light pollution in the real world. There were a few things that I noticed while playing through it; I think that respawning to the checkpoint when you fall from certain areas should be done automatically rather than manually by the player, and I also think there should be a visual difference between the spinning platforms and the regular platforms as those caught me off guard (such as a hinge in the middle of the platforms, just to name one suggestion). I also noticed a bug where I couldn't click the back button to revisit previous notes whenever unlocking new ones.
Overall, fantastic work to your entire team! This project turned out lovely and it would be great to see this polished further in the future!