I like a lot of your conceptual ideas, but not so much the way they´re executed. The constant beat of the drums in the second track, for example, doesn´t really feel like it supports the instruments very well. It feels less like a band playing together than a beat and an instrumental section happening simultaneously, if that makes sense. The contrast between the brighter, happier textures and the harsh guitar in the third track is very cool and reminds me early to mid 2000s alternative metal.