Heh... well...
First of all: I really like your fantasy and the world that you have come up with!
Secondly: Your soundtrack is perfect for playing with such an idea! Here, on the one hand it is purple, on the other - it has an atmosphere of various mysteries, detective work and conditions of cool jobs!
From the complaints: the panning of the instruments and it seems to me that there is a little extra "dirt" in the second track. And so - it's great! I liked it!
P.S. Shadows in the Desert Sun is a bit like Heavy Head from The Orwells, lol. It even gives off a pleasant atmosphere.