Great work, nice compositions and arrangement you have good melodic ideas, sometimes the the main melody sounds a little too "midi programmed" if you know what I mean and less human for an orchestral piece. Mixing the choir and strings is beautiful but in your tracks if you EQ a little bit and space the choir and strings a little bit more so its not always in the mid-range it will help so much and make everything even better to listen to. Great build up, nothing to say composition wise you already have a good understanding on which emotions to put through the music. Good job !
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This wonderful feedback. Thank you very much. You are actually correct about the mixing, but that was due to time. Due to some work, I wasn't able to focus on the jam as I would have liked. So some elements, such as the chorus, were taken directly from Sibelius' interpretation. So much so that I submitted minutes before the deadline. But I intend to produce it better in the future. Thank you very much for the feedback and tips, I will take them into account.