Took a look at this, here's what I noticed:
I know the main character's sprite is probably just a dummy sprite but I thought it looked funny, reminded me of the roblox character.
I actually felt like the controls were very precise! Even though the game's really short, getting the controls on the character did not take long at all.
I know you weren't able to really finish the game and all, but you should feel happy you were able to at least submit something. Everyone starts from somewhere. Now you can take the experience from this and plan a little more for the next one.
Good stuff. Keep making games!