Found some errors: In the Manipulate menu for Madeline, if you have the Ahegao option turned on, it's typoed as "Agegao". In the congratulate dialogue for the Pastel Bedroom, the Congratulate dialogue has Lily Pastel says "thong as titties" instead of "thong and titties" as it probably should be. The "Ask for fighting lessons" option never goes away even though you only need to do it once. Also, only one of Willa's werewolf form or normal form are visible in the gallery depending on the time of day. It would be great to see if you could make both appear, since they are somewhat separate characters in that they have different art.
Also, how do you get Ankha to take her top off? It says that she shouldn't get into fights, but I don't know what that means. I'd assume you'd ask someone to go attack her or something like that, but I can't find who to ask.
Edit: Nevermind, figured it out. It's a bit counterintuitive that you actually have to make her angry at you despite the rest of the things seeming to indicate that the challenge is to keep her happy with you to do things.