Last Minute Rating Spree
While I am getting a bit tired of the "mascot horror" Game and it's tropes and while I really dislike the sounds of beepbox, I feel like combination of the two really works. Something about the FM cheese just feels like a late 80s, early 90s TV commercial. You're writing ain't bad, but I would recommend, in the long run, to migrate to something more flexible.
Edit: oh, I really liked the answering machine.nice touch and great crunch on the vocals.