I like the intro of the game, it really made me wonder what came next. The gameplay was less my cup of tea. I think adding a background and a health bar for the player could be 2 great places to start. Without a background, I often couldn't feel if I was moving. Is it possible that you can't die/lose in the game? I just stopped moving at some point and took all the hits I could, and I never died :p
Still, nice message and nice work man!