I played it though, and here's my feedback:
- It worked fine for me on my laptop.
- It's pretty good overall! I liked the story, and the way it's presented is very nice.
- There are some bits that could probably be rewritten to read better, but it's always clear what's happening.
- In the menu, the contrast of the grey text against the also grey background is quite low which makes it hard to read, I'd recommend making the text colour brighter to make it easier to read.
- It seems intentional, so disregard if needed, but the pink text that gets darker is also harder to read because of low contrast.
- There's both PC and Windows options available on the page, when usually they mean the same thing. Maybe rename the PC one to Linux, because that's the OS I use, and the PC one worked for me.