First of all, your logo. As someone who struggles so so bad with logo design (to the point where I just straight up did not make a logo for my own submission to this jam), I really admire how interesting and cool y'all's looks. Very visually impressive.
Second, I love the different placement of the text in the intro to show Mia's speech, her thoughts, and then the narration. It's very smartly done and shows me everything we can do with visual novel execution. Great use of the medium.
The dialogue was also well written, Mia is extremely funny. She is also so unhinged. Scared the shit out of me, which I'm assuming was the goal, and if so it was done very effectively.