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Well, that was sad. :(

Good job on the writing! The descriptions of the scenes really helped my mind imagine the scenarios of the story, especially the vet clinic part. If I have to raise a point tho, I think the duration of the wetness of the dog is too long. I visited the beach second, then all the areas I visited after the beach said that my dog is still wet, so ye. Nevertheless, your story touched my heart.

Thank you for your feedback! I never thought about the dog being wet lasting too long, but it makes sense. I guess I should have just stuck to the dog being sandy. That gets the same point across I think.

I'm glad the story struck a chord, though I'm feeling guilty that I made people sad. Sorry