I read it and thought it was really cool. I really liked the context of the game; simple, brief and evocative. The art is also quite evocative. I felt like playing it. ^^
When I first read it, I think I identified two errors in the text:
- On page 8, it says to buy additional equipment with 20 Coins. On the next page, it says that the characters start with 3d10 Coins. I imagine the first one is correct because it also appears in the additional equipment section (page 11).
- Raised Skeleton (page 40) has the peculiarity of the Striga's legs.
Regarding the mechanics, I was unsure whether the armor values aren't too high to the point of slowing down the game, especially for the bosses, but I suppose the damage explosion and the damage advantage rules can balance this out. I need to test it out to evaluate it in practice.
I especially liked that the game has an open license. I hope to do something for Striga in the near future. ^^
Well done. You made a really cool game!