Post by Thursday Garreau in The Girls of the Genziana Hotel [ashcan] comments

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I did want to note a pair of minor errors I spotted:

p.21, "To start toe conversation" should probably be "the conversation"
p.21, the Twilight Phase is mentioned as being "after breakfast," seemingly repeated from the Dawn Phase

O, especially that last one is an error I'd rather correct sooner than later! Thanks.