So nice to hear how you took the theme to kind of an Irish folk style! I dig the rhythm and strong motif, albeit it can become a bit redundant without a part B, but surely that is the nature of many folk songs, and with improved dynamics and playing around silencing and reprising instruments it could work fantastically. I also think the track would benefit from less compression to give more air to every voice, but of course that is a matter of personal taste.