Checked this game out!
As a small suggestion, you may want to put a thumbnail for the game. It's the first thing people see, so it can help to drive some people in here to play and give feedback!
The title screen's style is cute! The music's cool, it reminded me of some older RPG games from early SNES. Also, props for putting so many minigames for things! It musn't have been easy! I was pleasantly surprised with the candle one, for example.
Also, I noticed the black robed guy hiding behind one of the houses. Cool attention to detail!
I also thought the dialogue had a very natural flow to it, except for the end portion, which suffered due to the time constraints you mentioned. Time constraints can be really tough and can force us to have to cut down on a lot of stuff, but I'm glad you were able to upload your game!
Keep making stuff!