If something is in a jam, then the something is asking to be rated, right?
If I would be the author, I would say: "Thank you for your detailed CONSTRUCTIVE critique. I will enhance it, especially according what you so smartly pointed out."
Feel free to respectfully rate all my games including what I published under DMDU in DriveThruRPG.
I knew that he is not the author but it did not had any influence to my answer for him.
Feel free to rate and comment all my games including what I have under DMDU in DriveThruRPG.
By the way, try the TTRPG "Raven", because according to your avatar, you should like that horror ravens-related TTRPG.
My Lady Partner, whose main part of her personality is like relational, respectable, realistical Raven, is sending you her greeting.
