Kat!! KAT!! This was a gorgeous visual novel. Not only is it a tie in to one of my favorite VNs ever, but the aesthetic and the tone of it was incredible.
Honestly, it was interesting to find out what happened on the side of the congregation that the player character from 10:16 belonged to.
And the Savior was appropriately eerie. His reasonings were... quite scary, actually. But I very much liked him as a villain. You really capture religious trauma and horror well when you delve into it.
Plus I love your art! ;-; it's so ethereal and pretty.
A Fire, Transfixed definitely has me in the mood to play 10:16 again, which it intend to do soon!