So so nice! Nice contrast between major and unsettling/mysterious. Sounds somewhat industrial too with the rhythm. Critique-wise maybe more variation to the texture besides pitch, at moments the drums hit, maybe 'scuttling' or quicker lighter sounds if that makes sense. But the vibe's so nice as is, and reminds me of Umami on YT.
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I get what you mean! Didn't cross my mind at the time, but will have to try recording/adding some fast textural stuff to this, if i can get myself to work on this without the "jam motivation boost" 😂
Hadn't seen any of umami's stuff before, but really thought provoking stuff for the lack of a better word, the art style in combination with the music has a real mood of it's own.
Haven't done much in this sort of atmospheric style, so thanks so much for the feedback!
No yea, that’s totally fair, it is impressive work for the time, especially after reading through the Miro part! You mentioned it’s a new style for you, and definitely seems like a lot of potential. I’d be curious to see where you'd take it.
Umami's does! It’s been years since watching it, so it was nice to be reminded of it through your work! ^^