very intense! i like how you manage to build on the intensity as the track progresses and you add variation using the vocals and percussion moving beneath the main melody. i like how you move off from the main motif around the 1:14 and go into some chromatic movement, it helps make the motif sound more new when it enters again, especially with a brand new chord progression later on. my only critique is that the track is very loud and i had to crank down my volume to be able to listen. other than that, very industrial and intricately made! great job!