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great vocals!! (wow, a lot of ppl are utilizing vocals this jam)

very intense and dark. really feels like you're approaching a significant turning point in the journey. a constructive critique i have is introducing the level of movement you added in the second half of the song earlier when you have the male choir singing, and later on after the middle portion. i noticed some comments about the chord progression feeling repetitive, but i think it's because the vocals are droning quarter notes alongside the bass drum and adding some rhythmic movement could add so much to the song. overall, i love the intensity of the world you've crafted with this song and your choices in instrumentation is super smart! i love the abundance of vocals in this track and i love the main motif that pops in occasionally throughout the song. great work!!!

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Thank you! :D

It's quite interesting to see the variety of comments saying how and why the track is repetitive and how to potentially fix it, because they're all true and all of them would work :D 

I think the main idea I had was for the dark opening to be very droning in a fixed pattern for that oppressive feeling that just keeps growing, and then break that up once the light breaks through. But honestly I failed to capitalize on that :D as the light portion is essentially structured the same way but just a few octaves higher. While it is a little bit more stabby, it has the same slow buildup and the rest just goes on as if nothing changed. More variety in chords, rhythm, textures, and an actual climax that contrasts the main buildup would all help fix this track, so I also agree with your points :D