I honestly think this just works so well. The vibe works really well.
While it was an ambient track that kind of droned, I must note the fact that I enjoyed every second of it, which is not easy to achieve. That is to say, this specific track doesn't need to "go anywhere" else in the right setting.
I could absolutely hear something like this in Dune.
Constructive feedback: I think to bring it to the next level, there are some mixing things that are perhaps beyond my capabilities. But, what my ear wants to hear to bring it to that next level would be for it to have more of a sense of space.
I could also imagine just building on the main sound, adding more volume and intensity, keeping the main drone. I imagine flying through a technologically advanced, industrial civilization, sort of dystopian.
This is really just very, very cool.