First off, I commend you on going out and creating!
Before I get into the my critique let me say this. Please keep at this, keep making games and learn from each experience. With that YOU WILL MAKE A GREAT GAME! I know this and I believe in you!
+++Good+++
+ IT IS BEAUTIFUL!!!
+ The Atmosphere - is eerie and damp, it definitely a place that is cursed.
+ The stone creature - When I saw them for the first, it put FEAR into me! They are gross looking, I am impressed on how you make the skin look pulsating but look like stone
---Needs Improvement---
- No Story or lore - the environment is a great place for story and lore. Why is this MC there? why is their WHY? What are these creatures? (My idea: A mining accident occurred, the MC lost a loved in the accident, but everything was brushed under the rug and the MC is trying figure out what happened. The creatures are the miner that were killed, here is the twist they are trying to protect, and main villain is the mining corp that owns the mine and they are trying to kill you because they caused the accident.) Add some notes and stuff.
- The creature - they don't do anything, after first they are terrifying, but eventually you get used to them...at a distance of course, they are NASTY looking!
- Messed Up Lantern - When the creature touch or you bum into something (former happen often and the later happens rarely), I have to exit the game and restart.
- The Key - PLEASE PUT THEM SO WHERE THE PLAYER CAN SEE IT!! Please!! Put it on a barrel, make the barrel noticeable, PLEASE. I try level 4, four times!
Final Thought: Please these things, YOU WILL HAVE SOMETHING GOOD
Rating: 3.7/5