Post by Yanna3River in Play and give feedback for Cat and Girl

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Store Page

Choose a font with more personality if possible.
The ⇔ is a little confusing on the store page.
When you first enter the game, I would take out the initial flash of the “CAT AND GIRL” logo. it's unnecessary if the next screen has the exact same logo.

Title Screen

The title screen makes me initially feel this game will be about a mystery.
I like the flashing effect on the “New Game” button, although I would have gone with text with more personality.
the game logo is very nice, I like the colors.

Settings

Intro Sequence

I would choose more flowery words.
There are a lot of spelling mistakes. Example ( “Young girl liked cat” )
I don't think the two cat images you showed ( The realistic one and the non-realistic one ), work together.

Here is how I would rewrite the intro:

“The girl adored the persian, matted fur and all.”

“ she picked it up and tucked it under her arm, using her sleeve to wipe the mud from it’s pristine coat.”

“You're coming home with me, she whispered in it’s ear.”

With a simple Act of kindness, a whiff of affection, her fate was sealed. “

I couldn’t get past the first level so I didn’t get very far in the game.

I hope this feedback helps!

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