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feel free to post a link in this thread if you'd like! :)

My games aren't very good ( yet ), since I'm still trying to learn my engine and improve. But if you would like to check out one of my games, try "Baltimore Penitentiary: Code GALE". I think it's my best one so far ( and also not a tech demo ). It does have some UI bugs and text bugs, unfortunately.  Although I do feel like my games are improving, my older games are almost embarrassingly  bad/poorly made. 

So cool!!!!!! :)

Is there a theme for this jam?

Please make a discord! :)

Hi,  I'm a Christian developer, and I was wondering if there are any other Christian developers out there who want to share their games or experiences as a Christian Developer in general. 

~~ I  will add some Icebreaker questions to this post later ( as I'm busy atm ).  ~~

I may also post scripture in this thread and it's connection to game development regularly, so feel free to subscribe/follow this thread! 

I hope you have a blessed day! 

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Idk why category organization like this isn't already built into this website. If you don't know CSS how can someone get a page like this set up? Is this even wise? ( knowing a site update might make the page inaccessible?

I found about 24 monsters! :D

I like this concept, but controls are a little difficult to use on browser

I like this comment lol

That's fine! Just do you're best. :)

Hi, are you capable of making a "girly" sounding song like this: 


I'm currently working on a girly, Halloween candy game for a game jam, and I would love something like this for the main theme.  

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Ben Weeds was my favorite character. I liked the profile art for the Westwood and the other characters, it was charming. I also thought the black bar over their mouths was a nice touch when they cursed. 

That duck looks like the linux duck! XD

The sprites moving around made it a little hard to see differences on the sprites. Otherwise fun game :)

This was a nice game!

This game has nice controls. :)

Thank you for posting these! I will work on these today.

Thank you thank you thank you!!!! 

This was honestly a really cool game. Idk if we're suppose to share ratings, but I gave you 5 stars for creativity and Theme. I LOVED the laugh hotel,  and the NPC's crazed dialog LOL. I'm sure you were inspired by the game "OFF" while creating this. 

What drew me into this game was the seemingly hand-drawn pictures in the thumbnails, and intro scenes. It looks like you either took a picture of paper drawings or photo-scanned them, either way it added a unique quality to the game. ( I may even try that in a future game myself, although I'm not that good at physicals drawing ). If you had stuck with that technique throughout the game, it would have added more cohesiveness to your project ( instead of doing a different style after the intro ).

This was honestly a really cool game. Idk if we're suppose to share ratings, but I gave you 5 stars for creativity and Theme. I LOVED the laugh hotel,  and the NPC's crazed dialog LOL. I'm sure you were inspired by the game "OFF" while creating this. 

What drew me into this game was the seemingly hand-drawn pictures in the thumbnails, and intro scenes. It looks like you either took a picture of paper drawings or photo-scanned them, either way it added a unique quality to the game. ( I may even try that in a future game myself, although I'm not that good at physicals drawing ). If you had stuck with that technique throughout the game, it would have added more cohesiveness to your project ( instead of doing a different style after the intro ).

This was a very atmospheric game, I also liked your use of Ambience and sound effects. The gloved hands remind me of Mickey Mouse a  little lol. I couldn't figure out how to get past the boards.

I think I've fixed the issue, so it shouldn't be soft-locked now. I'm aware of the bug causing the text to slightly overlap the portraits but I will have to work on that one tomorrow.

Thank you for giving it a play! And I hope you try it out again soon! :)

I'm currently working on the issue, I will keep you updated on when I fix it! :)

Thank you!

I don't think I've ever played a game like this before. The single frame movement was very unique! I liked it. :)

I've already commented on the jam page, but this was a very well thought-out strategy game! I left you some feedback here!

https://itch.io/t/4018547/vortexia-a-small-turn-based-strategy-quest-game?before...

The game was very unique! 


General Thoughts

  • Every button being the same color as a background made me have to stop and think about what was a button and what was not.
  •  It took me a few tries to figure out if I was moving or not.
  •  I would maybe have a dot in the Square to show that the player is actually moving.
  •  This game has a lot of potential!
  •  I really like little information pop up boxes,  when you hover over objects and equipment.
  •  why are “orbs” called “orbs”? 

Overview

This is a very interesting strategy type of game. It almost reminds me of a game like monopoly, where every step you take has a boost or detraction effect. 

(⌐■_■) I hope you find this feedback helpful! (⌐■_■)

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In response to your reply to the other commenter, I think it's unusual to share source code ( anywhere in tech, not just here ), for two reasons:

1. Exporting all that code would be difficult

2.Some people spend years learning their craft, and how to program functions, they might not see it as fair to give it away for free. 

3. Beginner programmers ( especially self-taught ones ), probably don't have to best code to begin with. 


If you want to learn to code, I recommend purchasing a book that will teach you your game engine, and/or watch some YouTube tutorials.

Follow Me , please btw. Trying to build a following! :)

What kind of lizard? o.o

What do you mean by indiepocalypse? I thought that was a game jam?

Also, I haven't been on this site very long, but before I started game deving I used to get very overwhelmed by all the games on the front page. 

Virus-chan strikes again.

I had no idea Doki Doki started on here! 0.0

I've never heard of Baba is You, so I'll have to look that up.

Fun game! I posted feedback for this here:

https://itch.io/t/4007028/play-and-give-feedback-for-cat-and-girl?before=4#post-...

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Store Page

  • Choose a font with more personality if possible.
  • The ⇔  is a little confusing on the store page.
  • When you first enter the game, I would take out the initial flash of the “CAT AND GIRL”  logo. it's unnecessary if the next screen has the exact same logo.

Title Screen

  • The title screen makes me initially feel this game will be about a mystery.
  •  I like the flashing effect on the “New Game”  button, although I would have gone with text with more personality.
  •  the game logo is very nice, I like the colors.

Settings

  • What does BGM,BGS, ME, & SE stand for? Why are they percentages?

Intro Sequence

  • I would choose more flowery words.
  • There are a lot of spelling mistakes. Example ( “Young girl liked cat” )
  • I don't think the two cat images you showed (  The realistic one and the non-realistic one ), work together.

Here is how I would rewrite the intro:

“The girl adored the persian, matted fur and all.”

“ she picked it up and tucked it under her arm, using her sleeve to wipe the mud from it’s pristine coat.”

“You're coming home with me, she whispered in it’s ear.”

With a simple Act of kindness, a whiff of affection, her fate was sealed. “

I couldn’t get past the first level so I didn’t get very far in the game.


I hope this feedback helps!

Follow me and post whenever you need more feedback!! :)

I've never purchased an asset pack before, but if I ever do in the future, I would look for what ever asset matches the look of my game. ( tropical plants for a jungle game  )

I will check this out later, so expect a critique soon! RPGmaker style games are my bread and butter. ╰(*°▽°*)╯

A turn-based life sim ( kind of like the Sims ), expect open world and multiplayer.  Maybe include online features.

Dang, I guess no one knows. . .

This

Type of asset/look, and licensing rights.