Hello, finally got to check out your entry. I know you finished long ago. Here's my VOD on checking out your entry.
Overall I appreciate the intent and the writing of the piece, as it tries to cover a difficult subject, (it is borderline too close to current politics, which would be a no no for feedbackquest generally...I get the intent is to present the worries/hope of the Beautiful island... ^^;;) My VOD includes detail feedback on the art editing and suggestion on how to improve the presentation. Best wishes. Overall well put together, it does need more polish at least on character art and key background arts for the demo.