Just because characters arent the MC or LI doesn't mean they shouldn't have sex scenes. Its actually alot more interesting when the antagonist and other characters are able to get in on the action. Its clear this project has no future since you are willing to change your vision over a few soyboys whining. Good Luck.
Hello, thank you very much for your comments.
I understand your position, but let me tell you that I haven't changed the central plot, but I have moved Michael and Kaoru's conflict forward, and I eliminated the scene so that it wouldn't cause discomfort since I indicated from the beginning in the comments and tags that this story wouldn't have netorare. Since Kim leaves with another without saying anything to Aoi and Yuri, that also happens to be an infidelity to which I did not want to give focus, but it is understood that it happens.
Regarding the erotic scene of the antagonists, I will keep it in mind for my future projects, since it is precisely a dilemma that I was thinking about.
I'm still new at this, “In the dark” is my second project and I'm polishing my method and focus, that's why I value every comment since it's the only way to get feedback and learn.
regards.
I appreciate your response and Im glad you didnt take the comment personally. But I just wanna say the character who was fantasizing about the orgy is not an LI correct? If thats the case its not NTR and its not even cheating for that matter because it doesnt even actually happen, But my main question to you is dont you want to do something fresh and unique with unexpected twists and turns? To me thats what makes an interesting story. Many of these characters are supposed to be vampires and vampires are savagely violent and very sexual in every movie and story they are in. Right now this is kind of looking like an amateur version of twilight its the same old human and vampire fall in love. My favorite part was the dynamic between the Female MC and the bad guy because they're rivalry/conflict has the potential to be very interesting. Im not saying there has to be a sex scene between them( although that would be interesting) but if he was able to bite her for example and get some of her powers and become the ultimate enemy that would make the story way more interesting as well as give the characters a strong motivation to eliminate him. And it would make the final Showdown between the 2 MC's and him to be way more crucial and more emotionally investing. Thats just my thoughts on it. Either way good luck with it.