Thank you very much for your supercomment!:) I was and I am still afraid, that because of the form of just emails, it is without good tense. But it looks, that I at least managed to wrote that two emails as two other persons. And I aimed the whole writting to an adventre opening, which looked like it worked well, because you felt like an in-game character reading what was not meant for him. Gotcha!;)
I will rephrase the sentence about fun fighting, but did not the name of the Inqusitor remind you an IRL person (from your history education)? Torquemada was the most famous IRL inqusitor, especially because he was apparenly having fun with his work including openly talking about that. Also the mayor and even the townie exists IRL. The townie name is literal translation of the name of my birth townie and the mayor style of writting is according to one of my Students.
I will read it once more to chatch the issues which you mentioned, I will rephrase the sentence and I will add a little bit more information including pictures. Is it not a cheating to use pictures in such a story? Because of the saying, that one picture is worth of thousand words.
Please remember, that I do not have the game, so my knowledge about its lore is minimal. If you would like to read an adventure preparation for a game which I have and utmost understand, here is a folder with whole adventure preparation (for the TTRPG "Apocalypse World" which has a lore somehow simlar to Dark Grim Future of the TTRPG "One Page Rules")...: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1_nafoTYX7DDHXDip9pRLVxMess-lLXNl .