Fred you’ve crafted an engaging and intense story with "Perseverance"! The pacing kept me on the edge of my seat, and I loved how you captured the sudden shift in leadership and the grim determination of the characters. While the setting and plot hit familiar notes, you brought them to life with vivid detail and strong dialogue.
Keep pushing those boundaries, and I’m sure your next piece will be even more impactful! Keep up the great work!