If I had to find a complaint, I would say that its a little wordy on the later half, but ultimately, the crash was absolutely enthralling and the flow kept me engaged through the rest.

Such good pacing throughout, I was totally engrossed. Great job.

Fred you’ve crafted an engaging and intense story with "Perseverance"! The pacing kept me on the edge of my seat, and I loved how you captured the sudden shift in leadership and the grim determination of the characters. While the setting and plot hit familiar notes, you brought them to life with vivid detail and strong dialogue. 

Keep pushing those boundaries, and I’m sure your next piece will be even more impactful! Keep up the great work!

Loved this one! Found myself wishing for more.

Loved this one! Found myself wishing for more.

by far my favorite submission to read! well done! I am rooting for Kai and the rest to make it out.