Hey there! Always nice to see someone new giving game dev a try.
Some things I noticed:
You have a typo in your page description. The game seems to use WASD to move, not ZQSD.
You have some typos in your intro cutscene.
You have some typos in your game jam submission page.
Your art assets are pixel art, but they don't have the same style. This is a bit jarring.
The intro cutscene zooms in and out a lot, Might be better to use one, maybe two zooms.
The intro cutscene quickly swaps between music. Might be better to stick with a single score for the cutscene.