Now I've been lurking on this site for quite a while now. But this is the 1st time I've ever felt compelled to say something. Like I believe this is my 1st comment on this site, and I do it to give praise. Now I'm guessing you have experience elsewhere with animation? Because for a first test, this is fantastic. From the art style, to the dreamy soft look, to the beautiful character. 10/10 for me.
And while this comment is getting a bit long. I wanted to give one more specific praise. I've never been a fan of swallowing. Honestly I've always found it a bit repulsive, however. I honestly think that one thing was the hottest thing in this game. So really, kudos to you for that.