Interesting first release, looking forward to how the story continues!
This doesn't have to do with the game itself as much as to how you release it, but I think it would be really helpful if you could have it be nativelly downloadable from Itch, and also added a Google Drive mirror. The reason for this is that past a certain file size - your game is not there yet, but will be if you keep updating it - MEGA has a quota that makes you wait 6 hours to continue downloading, so this can lead to interested players having to wait up to a full day before being able to play your game, and Mediafire tends to have bothersome pop-up windows when clicking, that's why I always prefer games to have an option to natively download on Itch, or at least have a Google Drive download mirror.