I really enjoyed the presentation. The first minigame was definitely my favorite of the two. The simple art direction gave it some sinister vibes -- probably because of your writing! I enjoyed how disorienting the glitched-out second half was, but to be perfectly honest I felt it was less engaging than the first half. I didn't really have any incentive to follow my original path, so I ended up just walking a different direction. I do think that games 1 and 2 have a lot of aesthetic cohesion, I just would have liked more mechanical overlap between the two.
All in all, fun game. You made a great submission!