Welp, this one is very difficult for me. Considering it your very first jam game, it was good. The concept was good, but it lacked a good game experience, simply adding a background music would have improved the game drastically. The gameplay was very difficult, without the tutorial I just couldn't figure out the game mechanics and the game itself it very hard for me. These are what game jams are for though, I hope you continue to keep making games :D and do consider checking out our submission!
https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2024/rate/2913495