Skip to main content

Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
TagsGame Engines
(6 edits) (+1)

Great fun in this game. Love how much time you get and the girls really come off as desirable relational pursuit. Only critique I have so far is you seem to go way too heavy handed when trying to show the difference between Autumn and the other characters. Like it's clear that she's religious and thus has different standards, but you seem to go out of your way at times bend the characteristics of other characters to make them seem more laid back or coolerthanu about certain situations especially when some of them would have had similar dispositions in the first place. Mainly just with Kali. For instance, she's acting like an uninvolved, enlightened sex guru all of a sudden when Autumn comes to her with an insecurity and shyness about sex and open sexuality, something Kali herself can sympathize with and relate to pretty easily, at the end of her story still herself only confident and relaxed enough about sex in any regard when the MC is to be involved or he simply urges her to participate, and she still doesn't feel laidback enough to jump thoughtlessly into conversations about it either. Like she'll even engage in sex, but never flippantly, totally without reservation or even some manner of bashfulness. Even Lin is more chill about sex than her now, haha. Same dynamic as when Autumn comes out wearing this skimpy bikini showing a tuft of pubic hair, Kali's like "lolwat's wrong, what a surprise??" when she would have been just as squeemish about it, and she actively wigs out when wearing super skimpy bikinis at this stage, particularly around other people. That's not a bad thing, rather I appreciate it as it maintains some sort of personal cadence and is a solid trait and dynamic that Kali brings to the table.

Aside from that, Loving all of these character stories and the sex is bomb.

I think my personal favorites are Kali (bestgirl), her sister (best sidechick so sorry Kali, but shes irresistible T_T . i always save and go back before i cheated anyways lol) Emma, Felicity, Android and Kate. Also Ashley has probably the most perfect face. She's just not on these girls' level, rip. PLZ make Kate a full blown story for all that is good in the land.

I'm not sure where Kali  being an enlightened sex guru comes from. Autumn came to her for help, and Kali suggested she masturbate so she stops being horny. Sounds like normal logic to me.

(+1)

I mean I’m talking about the way the characters interact with each other, not the stripped away cause and effect or robotic insert a problem/get a solution exchange. Her logic make sense lol. Idk if you read the whole comment as it is kindof a paragraph, but of all the things I mentioned (which is a lot) what I didn't mention her answer itself. Im talking about the way shes acting, her disposition etc in tandem. 

If you know what Im talking about, but don’t care cause “reason” or just dont agree then aight. Its your game and you've got shit to do. It just felt off to me, but Im not trying to get you to just go back and change stuff especially if you don't even know what the problem with it is.

I agree it does sound like pretty normal logic