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All characters depicted are 18+.

Thanks lol

I mean I’m talking about the way the characters interact with each other, not the stripped away cause and effect or robotic insert a problem/get a solution exchange. Her logic make sense lol. Idk if you read the whole comment as it is kindof a paragraph, but of all the things I mentioned (which is a lot) what I didn't mention her answer itself. Im talking about the way shes acting, her disposition etc in tandem. 

If you know what Im talking about, but don’t care cause “reason” or just dont agree then aight. Its your game and you've got shit to do. It just felt off to me, but Im not trying to get you to just go back and change stuff especially if you don't even know what the problem with it is.

Great fun in this game. Love how much time you get and the girls really come off as desirable relational pursuit. Only critique I have so far is you seem to go way too heavy handed when trying to show the difference between Autumn and the other characters. Like it's clear that she's religious and thus has different standards, but you seem to go out of your way at times bend the characteristics of other characters to make them seem more laid back or coolerthanu about certain situations especially when some of them would have had similar dispositions in the first place. Mainly just with Kali. For instance, she's acting like an uninvolved, enlightened sex guru all of a sudden when Autumn comes to her with an insecurity and shyness about sex and open sexuality, something Kali herself can sympathize with and relate to pretty easily, at the end of her story still herself only confident and relaxed enough about sex in any regard when the MC is to be involved or he simply urges her to participate, and she still doesn't feel laidback enough to jump thoughtlessly into conversations about it either. Like she'll even engage in sex, but never flippantly, totally without reservation or even some manner of bashfulness. Even Lin is more chill about sex than her now, haha. Same dynamic as when Autumn comes out wearing this skimpy bikini showing a tuft of pubic hair, Kali's like "lolwat's wrong, what a surprise??" when she would have been just as squeemish about it, and she actively wigs out when wearing super skimpy bikinis at this stage, particularly around other people. That's not a bad thing, rather I appreciate it as it maintains some sort of personal cadence and is a solid trait and dynamic that Kali brings to the table.

Aside from that, Loving all of these character stories and the sex is bomb.

I think my personal favorites are Kali (bestgirl), her sister (best sidechick so sorry Kali, but shes irresistible T_T . i always save and go back before i cheated anyways lol) Emma, Felicity, Android and Kate. Also Ashley has probably the most perfect face. She's just not on these girls' level, rip. PLZ make Kate a full blown story for all that is good in the land.

I'm liking remy, lena and concept amelia and sashas designs the most.

Great to hear! It's a fun and involving vn so I'm happy to talk about it. I personally would prefer to see something go down between Glasha and Roman as I think that would be the most interesting take in seeing how they dance around and interact with each other in that aituation as opposed to Glash and someone else more easily bedded or openly fuckable. Just that I would like to see how Glasha and Roman fool around. I wouldn't want to see them become a sappy couple by any stretch, but I would love to see them explore certain other bounds of friendship that I think would be up for grabs with friends with experiences and morals like they have. I understand that you have a schedule and ambitions so I'm not wailing and waving my "GLASHA" flag but I think it would be very entertaining, at the least lol. I mean at the very least, Glasha has seen and thinks his dick is glorious lmao. Seeing those two throw down and then kick someone's ass would be cool. About that Ui demo, the girl seems cute and I'd be interested in seeing more of that soon. It all seems fun. Great to hear from you.

bruh

This is a very interestingly done vn. I enjoyed the story progression, branching arc and possibilities, changing character relationships and impressively well maintained abundance of art greatly. Very well done. I began the game and unlocked all of the gallery scenes in one 4 or so hour sitting. 

All art pieces were worth it as they were all high caliber and I didn't notice you slack or drop in quality in any of the pieces despite just how many there were. I have gone through previous Vns that have varying levels of consistency from passable to lacking entirely that I have written off as just being a passable byproduct of exhaustion or understandable laziness given that a certain number of art pieces were included, but this VN has gone above and beyond the number of CGs I have seen in just about any free VN I have ever played and yet every single one you have produced looks as though it was the first one drawn. Even when moving from scene to similar scene, you didn't abuse the fact that you could simply redraw a section of one picture in order to fit the next situation. Instead, you drew a completely new picture, giving the player a another treat just by simply progressing the dialogue. The inspiration and effort is palpable in every single one and I can easily say that at least in terms of visuals and artistic quality and consistency, this is one of the most high caliber western VN experiences you can get online and all of it is for free. Absolutely wonderful. 

I actually found myself kind of shocked a few times throughout the story, and I don't easily get pulled for surprise twists. Perhaps it was just because I really wasn't expecting to be blown away by another free product that I found on itch.io, but you far exceeded my expectations. The storyline and the seemingly endless possibilities (despite being tied in general to three main choices of conclusion) are satisfying and I found myself impressed multiple times with how I could manipulate the future with just how many choices you grant us. I have always wanted and favored VNs that focus decently on giving the reader a rather considerable choice in how the story plays out and I can tell you without a shadow of a doubt that you have produced at least in the top 5 of VNs (and top two that are free) in terms of surprising me with how much free reign, choice and real (not faux or simulated) control or choice unlike countless VNs have done before. I'm not blaming them whatsoever as making a VN with a considerable amount of story while giving the player that much choice can be a huge pain, but you have made something pretty special. In fact, I don't think I've played a free VN before that has granted the player this much unique dialogue for every minor or major choice that they make throughout. There were quite a few times when you could have just copy and pasted the same dialogue from the main choice into any of the other branching dialogues or interactions and had it make perfect sense, but you went out of your way to instead create a totally unique experience, often time even incorporating brand new CGs (yes, plural) into the resulting scenes just to make it feel like you going back and trying all different options was actually worth it, and just about every single time, they were. 

Having read through this and many, many others, I can say it is leagues better than most paid VNs I have run through and among the top 3 that come to mind when I think of those I didn't. Bravo!

Of course all of this pales in comparison to the fact that I simply require more Glasha. Honestly she is my favorite character in the game (from a favorable standpoint, Carmen is obviously a great villain) and she is the one ray of light that I was the most attracted to throughout the course of the game. Hell I think I even had a dream about her last night. I didn't ask for this burden. :(  So please. Glasha. How does this become a thing? When do I get to Roman myself into those breeches?

tl;dr

Please make Glasha mateable. 

Sincerely, 

redrope