First of all, congrats on making your first gamejam! That's always a great accomplishment!
I liked the vibes, kinda feels Puppet Combo inspired with the visual style and story.
I did have a hard time figuring out how to complete certain parts of the game tho. When Hannah goes off to the dumpster, I would've appreciated some environmental hint as to where to go (A lamp post in the middle of a dark lit area or something). And as much as I can appreciate the hard work put to build such a large scene, the rest of the buildings didn't doo much for me but get me lost.
Also, I get that the flashlight battery is good for building tension, but I didn't see the point to having it as a resource if I couldn't replenish it somehow. While looking for Hannah I ran out of battery and it made the rest of the experience a bit frustating for me.
But other than that, really great effort!